Good joke
but it bugged me that he didn't have any sideburns at all. Cowboys have sideburns man.
Good joke
but it bugged me that he didn't have any sideburns at all. Cowboys have sideburns man.
whaaaat no way man that's the outlaws.
goats goats goats goats goats nipple goats goats
Nicely made and everything but if someone doesn't laugh at the first goat joke they're not going to laugh at the 50 that follow. If you're gonna repeat yourself that much you'd better make damn sure you've got a good gag in the first place.
Super
The kiddies of Newgrounds don't deserve comedy of this class.
Extraordinary
superb
Good jokes
but try to come up with a way of getting between them besides the TV static thing. It was a nice idea at first but now it's just becoming a bit tired. At this point I'd prefer a straight cut to be honest.
sharks
Outstanding
Hmm
Some of the dancing animations are absolutely brilliant but the song really doesn't do them justice. It sounds like it was very rushed out and the lyrics didn't have much thought put into them. Comedy lyrics kind of depend on surprising the listener and I don't think there was anything in there I couldn't have come up with myself on the spot. I don't know if Weebl's just becoming apathetic or what but his older songs had a feeling of excitement and creativity and this is just a bit flat.
Not bad
Your joke was fine but the timing was a little bit weak. Having a bit more noise during the punch line might have made it stronger too.
Great animation
but the story was a little limp. If you'd lost 90% of the dialogue you could have told it quicker and given a lot more impact. You did a really great job making it look nice but I'd love to see what you could do if you worked just as hard on the pacing.
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